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There are

People close, walking near

Breathing the same air

Yet, somehow, not really here

Then I have you, far away

In a distant place

Yet, tangible your presence

In this surrounding space

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6 Comments

  1. You have captured the feeling perfectly.
    A familiar one.

  2. “Breathing the same air

    Yet, somehow, not really here” captures the isolation of a crowd perfectly – anyone could identify.
    Then you go on to add the sharp contrast with one at a distance – but “tangible.”
    Excellent – one of your best

    • Thank you so much for all the positive reinforcement. Glad you think so. Much appreciated 🙂

  3. I really like your voice – mine is still hit or miss. If the rest of your stuff is close to this you’ve gained another follower!


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